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All Deviations
All Deviations


Siren

I heard once
that across the Red River,
thirty miles south of where
the thornbushes grow wild into a
solid wall, there is a ghost town
in the valley surrounded by mountains.
A ghost town in ruins, each house
missing a roof or a wall, sometimes
just stripped down to its foundation,
and an impermeable layer of black
smog hanging around its streets. Some
people say it was ravaged in the war
a few years back, and some say that
everyone just left one day, and the
still-lit empty houses tore themselves
apart in their loneliness.

One stayed behind.
A small girl in a blue dress that has
grown grayish and dirty with
too much wear, and long,
ash-colored hair that covers her face.
They say if you're very quiet,
and very still, she'll approach you,
tilting her head back to let her
hair slide back off her face. Her eyes
are wide and pupilless, deep and white
and so large they threaten to swallow
her face whole, and she smiles simply
and says in a small voice: "Listen,
traveler, can I sing you a song?"
And if you refuse, she will follow
you all the way to the mountains,
empty eyes pleading, asking
over and over and over,
her voice echoing in your ears
long after you leave.

But I've been told that that one day,
a man came to that town
with no baggage and no destination,
and he leaned up against a ruined wall,
waiting for her. And when he was asked,
he smiled back, a bright smile
that lit his gaunt, sunken face. "Please."

Her voice is the center of the sun,
the hot core pouring from her lips
and covering the entire valley
in melted light, and it paralyzes
his every nerve. At first, it is just
tiny fingers drumming up his
spine as each blood vessel vibrates
to her song, the sharps and flats
of a tune vaguely familiar, but
lost somewhere in his memory,
and then it is a numbness sweeping
through his limbs, heart, and mind
until he is detached from his body.
They say she'll be young, they'll both be
young, as long as she keeps singing,
so her song keeps going, repeating,
a little different each time she reaches
the refrain, until her voice breaks
in her throat. She opens her mouth
wide to begin again, only to swallow
cold, empty air.
©2005-2008 ~lady-of-the-whip
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I... wasn't going to post my poetry. Wasn't. It's not something most people really like to read... buuuuuut a lot of what I write is poetry, so, why not?

This is the longest poem I've ever written. I wrote it last year in my Portfolio class, after a lecture on Myth Poetry. Those who are fans of the manga D.Gray-Man will see where the inspiration came from. Enjoy!

(P.S- I :heart: feedback, so please comment if you have the time!)

P.P.S - Everyone go look at this illustration did, as well! [link]
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~kanon88:iconkanon88: Sep 17, 2005, 11:31:50 AM
O.o wow that was really cool schbecky! I could picture it all....so I guess that's called a good use of imagery ~remebering the Jonesy days~

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*Shinsengumi-Fan-Girl:iconShinsengumi-Fan-Girl: Sep 17, 2005, 12:11:05 PM
wooow that was really cool Schbecky-botchan! And you know how I feel about poetry ^____~

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What a cute boy! I can't wait to see him defiled~ ^__^
~aurussteelsword:iconaurussteelsword: Sep 17, 2005, 12:20:58 PM
Wow.... the last six lines literally gave me chills! I love it!

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~lady-of-the-whip:iconlady-of-the-whip: Sep 17, 2005, 6:51:30 PM
Hee, sankyuu! Jonesy has editted this poem, actually... I think it was one of the only poems of mine she "got", with the rest, it's "*Blank look* It's nice, but what is it?" *laughs*

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And the end of all our searching shall be to return to the place where we started and know it for the first time.

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~lady-of-the-whip:iconlady-of-the-whip: Sep 17, 2005, 6:51:44 PM
That means a lot coming from you, Tania-sama! ^__^

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And the end of all our searching shall be to return to the place where we started and know it for the first time.

- T.S Eliot
*Shinsengumi-Fan-Girl:iconShinsengumi-Fan-Girl: Sep 17, 2005, 6:52:25 PM
ahahaha yesssh! I liked it cause to me it seemed more like a story ^. ^

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An original yaoi character club? *OC-YAOI-CLUB BRILLIANT!!

What a cute boy! I can't wait to see him defiled~ ^__^
~lady-of-the-whip:iconlady-of-the-whip: Sep 17, 2005, 6:56:18 PM
That's such a nice compliment, Aurus~ *hugs* Thank you!

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And the end of all our searching shall be to return to the place where we started and know it for the first time.

- T.S Eliot
~phoenien:iconphoenien: Sep 18, 2005, 9:58:43 PM
So much love. <3 I have a crazy obsession with sirens, so yeah. ^^

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Alas it is a simple song, but it works everytime. :music:
~lady-of-the-whip:iconlady-of-the-whip: Sep 19, 2005, 6:46:49 PM
Thank you! <3 Heh, sirens are so interesting... this one was fun to write~

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And the end of all our searching shall be to return to the place where we started and know it for the first time.

- T.S Eliot